Category: Writers Block
I was talking to a friend today.
She and I were wondering how a romance would go if the people in it were both blind?
How does it start? “He heard her speaking and was attracted to her gentle speech?” “She smelled his masculine scent when he arrived at the party?”
They cannot meet and have “love at first sight.”, so how does it happen?
I invite you pros to write this romance right here on the Zone, like many other sights do with role playing games, or stories.
I personally am not a writer, so this story will have to continue without me. We will call me the producer and all rights will belong to the Zone and if this is published we will give the proceeds to the health of the Zone. Lol
Come on! Write this love sorry.
“Judy heard the taxi pull up, because the breaks were squeaky, and the street was wet, so the water splashed.”
She wasn't sure of what to think, but she was sure it had to be better them the last guy she was with.
To those who looked at her passing on the street She looked average, or at least she thought so.
Her Hair was brown and to her shoulders but was in a ponytail at the moment, and she stood at 5 foot 7 or so.
She wasn't a total stick but she wasn't a whale either, her blue eyes gazed from her sockets at the world around her, yet they couldn't see anything.
A mutual friend had told her about this blind guy she knew, she thought he'd be good for her.
He was sweet and accepting of others, and she said he was extremely sexy!
Well, she wasn't sure if he was or not, for she hadn't met him yet but was going to.
I went out and got quite involved with 2 different guys at diffeerent times. One man I went to a training center with, and another man was recommended to me as a person to correspond with by tape. Hung out with both for visits, but the disadvantage for me and him too was the distance deal. Jim was down state and Steve lived in another state.
Judy was so excited she could hardly breath! She kept smoothing and resmoothing out the skirt of her dress to make sure it was perfect. I keep forgetting to keep the umbrella over my head. Now Judy she said to herself you know if you don't keep the umbrella over your head now your dress will be ruined, and you won't make a good first impression. She smiled into the distence, a warm sun shining brightly on her brown hair and the breeze blew softly past her as her blue dress moved a bit in the calm wind. A car drove up and a man with chocolate brown eyes and dark skin emerged from the car. He payed the taxi driver, they exchanged a smile and a few pleasantries as he left the car to get Judy. He walked up to her, and smiled warmly, immediately feeling at ease around her. "Hi." He said looking stright at her with a smile gracing his masculine face and high cheekbones. "I am Christian Christian Gray and I am delighted to make your acquaintence Miss"? He questioned, his smooth voice enveloping Judy in a fit of revery she could not contain. The question hung in the air for a second, as Judy responded sweetly with a sweet smile as she stared kindly at the man in front of her. "My name is Judy Annastesha Gray. It is a pleasure to meet you Mr. Gray." She responded politely, and bowing low out of respect and curtisy as she was brought up to act around civilized gentlemen. "No need for such formalities Judy just call me Christian." He laughed heartily, and Judy laughed right along with him. "Nice to meet you Christian." "Nice to meet you too Judy." He gave her his arm, and she took it happily. As they walked to the taxi, Christian waved the taxi on with a wave of his hand. "Wait Christian now how will we get to the restaurant now? The taxi would have been fine." She said non chalantly, not sure how they would get to the restaurant since the taxi had driven away only a few moments before. "No worries Judy I have it all under control." As he said this, a limo pulled up, and Christian and Judy got into the limo. "How can you afford this? This must have cost you a fortune to rent this limo for only one night." She said a bit unsure, but on the inside she was thrilled at how great the night was going so far, and she couldn't wait to see how the night would continue. "No worries Judy I own this limo." He said sweetly, and he touched her hand softly. "I can tell you are a very special lady so I want to make the best impression I possibly can on you." So do I." She answered, glad he was as happy and nervousas she was. "Then relax, sit back, and enjoy yourself. You have made a good impression on me so far and I know it would only continue to get only better and I will think all the more of you as this night progresses on." "Ok I can do that." She said, with a sigh of relief and happiness. "Good." Christian said, and he smiled genuinely at her. "Driver please take us to the airport. "Yes sir right away." Thedriver turned the limo engine on, and they were in the airport in minutes. With their canes going a mile a minute and getting on a plane to Cuba with some help, Judy was excited to see where this night would go from here now that they were on a plane. Well this is not like the usual dates I go on, she said to herself smiling a bit. I think I am going to have a great time tonight. Can't wait to see where the story goes from here. Here is my contribution. :)
"Your passport, Ma'am?" A voice from behind. She turned, startled, to face a busy customs official in starched white shirt and blue pants. This was not a white Immigration official from the U.S., He was only half the height of her date, but obviously in command.
"Your passport, Ma'am? Sir?"
The man quickly produced his passport. She immediately became flustered: "But, I didn't ..."
"Didn't know that a country other than the U.S. needed passports for foreigners?"
"No, not that," she spluttered. Racing through her mind were images of her new love as a spy, maybe one of those immigrant sympathizers, one of those Cuban sympathizers? Why had he brought her here? What was he thinking? Why wouldn't he just do something?
"We're going to have to detain you when we touch down, Ma'am. We can't have visitors into Cuba without proper documents." He spoke clear English, but with a Latino crispness that never came from the Texas or California border she had so often heard about during her conservative upbringing. He said "Cooba" instead of pronouncing it "Q Buh," the way people she knew pronounced it.
"She's with me," bumbled her lover.
Hmm, not a spy. Weren't spies supposed to be a lot more sure of themselves during times of trouble? At least that is how it always works in the movies and in romance novels.
Paranoid thoughts gave way to resentment: Why had she brought him here? Why didn't he think of her getting a passport? And why do these Cuban people need passports from white ladies like her anyway?
"Since you brought her, you also will be detained, sir."
But how do we see warm smiles? We have lots of color in our stories, but how is color perceived?
Blonde hair, Blue eyes?
We are reading documents, so are they braille?
Good stuff, but remember both parties are blind, so come one pros!
Judy was scared. Why did we get detained? I should never have come? Should I stay? Judy did not realize it, but she had spoken out loud all these questions, so Christian knew her fears. "I am sorry I made you nervous. I just wanted so badly for this night to be perfect. You only deserve the best." Christian said softly, his voice warm and genuine. "I don't know what to do." Judy sighed, and tears filled her eyes. Out of desperation Judy and Christian fell to their knees, and prayed to God for his guidence and wisdom to help them find a solution to their current dilemma. After an hour had passed, they both rose and Christian's hand brushed Judy's hand softly and he caressed his hand with hers tenderly. "Don't worry my love." Christian whispered softly in Judy's ear as he hugged her to comfort and ressure her. "I brought us here I will find a solution." Judy's body moved from it's rigid state it was in before with her shoulders slumped to a much more comfortable and happy position with her shoulders pulled back and her steps long and brisk. "Mr. Ramirez"? Christian spoke in a very authorative but firm tone to the man who told them they would be detained. "I would like to make a deal with you." "If I agree to marry Judy then would you give her a Cuban passport after we are legally married so we can visit any time we wish with out any further problems." "Of course not a problem I would be glad to." "Lovely." Christian's face brightened and a warm blush covered his face, and he knew he was blushing because his mom always told him red is like the color of a tomato. Christian took out a beautiful diamond engagement ring out of a small red velvet box out of his pocket, and took Judy's hand in his. "Judy I knew we have only knew each other for only a few hours but I know there is no one else I would want to live and spend the rest of my life with but you. You mean everything to me. You are the wind the rain and the sun that flowers my soul. Will you marry me"? I can't live my life with out you." "Yes Christian yes I would love to." Judy cried in happiness, and Judy laughed happily. Christian held her for a long time, and he put his hand and stroked her face with his hands. When he found her mouth, he leaned in and kissed her softly. "I love you." "I love you too." They took hands, and walked off to a small church to get married and share their lives together. Once a priest married them, they walked out of the small chapel laughing and talking happily to one another of all the plans they wanted and dreams they would share with one another. Once they got back to the airport, Mr. Ramirez handed Judy a braille pass port and handed her asignature guide to sign that it was hers, and she signed with a pen. He handed her the passport, and he reached out his hand and handed her the passport. She took it, and put it in her purse immediately, not taking any chances. "As I promised you Mrs. Gray your passport. You and Mr. Gray can pass and travel to Cuba any time you wish. Thank you for flying with Jet Blues airlines and enjoy your honeymoon." "Thank you we will." Christian and Judy said in unison, then they laughed happily as they went off to check into a hotel for their wedding night. As they walked along the streets hand in hand, Judy could not help but wonder what would happen next to her and Christian? But at that time all she cared about was she had the man she loved beside her, and nothing could take away that happy and tingily feeling she had enveloping her heart and body now, and she knew she would always feel this way. She knew as long as she had Christian, she would always be loved protected safe and well taken care of. And Christian knew how happy he would be to finally know what it felt like to be in love with his dream girl and that would never change. I can't wait to see the next installment! :)
Smile.
As they continued toward the hotel and away from the airport, Judy noticed the changes. The streets became narrower, the modern conveniences on display for foreigners left behind at the airport. The cars rumbling by on the streets sounded, and smelled, like old 1950s junkers. As they waited at an intersection, a truck rumbled slowly past, a man yelling over a bullhorn something about capitalistas. She could hear movement in the rear of the truck, then whoops and hollers, a wolf whistle, and something about Gringos and capitalistas and esa puta blanca. "It's OK honey," said Christian confidently, "Those are just anti-free-trade demonstrators. The new free trade agreements, now that Fidel and Raul Castro are both dead."
They stepped inside the hotel, which had not yet been upgraded via the new capital markets starting to penetrate Cuba. Stuffy, humid and close, it was far from the honeymoon location of her dreams. Nothing like Mazatlan or Alcopolco.
Yes, yes, no more descriptions with color, and reading of documents. Great. Come on pros. How does a blind couple perceive a smile, a touch, these narrow streets? Yes I understand, but we must see it in the story!
Nice! I am really liking this story so far. :)
After checking to a room and getting their keys, they sat on the edge of the bed in silence for a few minutes.
Judy's thoughts were going in circles like a hampsterwheel inside her brain.
How the hell could so much happen in one night, I start out going on a date and end up married to someone i hardly know and am in Cuba?
He seems genuine enough but how do i know he isn't some sort of sadistic murder?
Well, time will tell on that one i guess, she thought to herself, and she slowly started to relax.
"I know this isn't exactly paradice, but we can make the most of it now and really celebrate when we get back to the u.s, if that's what you want." Christian spoke suddenly
"Of course that's what i want hun, not that there's anything wrong with Cubba but i wasn't exactly planning on living here." Judy replied with a furrowed brow.
"Listen, there's something I've always wanted to do, but i've never had the nerve of asking since I never considered getting married so soon." Judy suddenly asked, a thought going through her brain like a knife to butter.
"what is it love?" Christian asked sounding interested.
"That's just it, I want to show you and surprise you, if your willing." Judy replied, a hint of seduction creeping into her voice.
She could feel a slow smile creeping across her lips like a spider's web, and she could tell it was like nothing she'd done before, it was slow, calculated, and it grew with each passing second.
For a moment, Christian was stunned, he thought she knew what she was proposing, and he wanted to respond so badly, but his tongue wouldn't formulate the words, so he let the seconds hang and tick by.
Finally after what seemed like an eternity, Christian responded by saying, "Do whatever you want to me, I'm yours."
She knew exactly what she wanted to do to him, even though she'd never had sex in her life.
Yes, she'd had plenty of fantasies and had gotten off numerus times, but this was going to be the first time she'd ever get to experience one of her daydreams.
She thought about riding him like a racehorse but decided against it, she wasn't sure if she was ready for children or not so she decided to go a different route.
Slowly, she unbuttoned his shirt and let it fall away, revealing tanned smooth white skin across a frame that was toned yet it wasn't to skinny, or to buff ither.
She found this out after touching his chest, soulders and arms.
After doing this she proceeded to remove the rest of his clothes, which he let her do, once he was nakid he did the same for her and they both laid next to each other and waited.
At last Christian made the first move by placing his hand on her shoulder, but she took it away and said, "relax, let me do the work and enjoy it."
He complied and felt her hands massaging his chest, then his abdomine and shoulders.
He began to let the tention of the day drain away and he felt himself sinking into the bed beneath him.
After asking him to turn over and massaging his entire body, she let her mouth and tongue go on there own exploration.
After touching his lips, she brought her mouth to his and they began to kiss.
Slowly at first, then letting there tongues explore each other's mouths, they began to kiss quicker and more intensely.
Letting her fingers travel down his stomach and hips, she reached between his legs and found what she was looking for.
After examining it and finding no hidden surprises, she let her fingers slowly squeez and pull up and down on his member, which did nothing at first.
But as time passed, it began to harden and lengthen, and with every passing second she could tell Christian was loving every minute of it.
"Oh, Judy, my god your amazing." he breathed panting slightly as he could feel himself getting hard.
"You haven't felt anything yet." Judy said placing her mouth on his erect peenis and beginning to suck.
Guess this story needs a "might offend"
H O T!
lol, I just decided to run with it.
Christian had never felt so good in his life. What Judy was doing was something that he'd dreamed of for years.
Sure he'd dated women before, and yes they'd tried having a sexual relationship with him, but they never seemed to go at his pace, though he understood it was give and take.
He wasn't sure if she'd done it before or not, but who cared, she seemed to understand him without even having to ask.
As her tongue went up and down his hardening dick, he closed his eyes and let it intensify.
After a few minutes of this(and some hard sucks), he was ready to burst.
"I'm going to come." he moaned in extacy.
"Not yet your not." Judy whispered in that seductive tone of hers.
"What the hell is she talking about, of course i am." he thought to himself, he could feel it coming on fast.
All of a sudden she stopped, and for a moment he thought he'd just explode right there.
"What the..." Christan began but Judy cutt him off.
"shh, i'm just taking a sec to rest my jaws." Judy said reassuringly.
Releaved and slightly impatient he lay back, and waited.
Only it wasn't her mouth he felt on his hard member, he felt her spread his legs wide and with one motion shuved his dick deep into her ass.
"Oh! He cried out in surpris, this was something he wasn't expecting.
"Like my surprise?" Judy said a slight chuckle escaping her lips as she began grinding him, she could feel him starting to come already, and it felt better then she thought.
Christian, at a loss for words, just expressed how good of a job she was doing, and let her drain him of every drop of seaman he had in him.
Next day? Breakfast, a walk in the park?
bg, you are actually quite a good writer. some others on this board really need to proofread and learn not to repeat themselves, use correct punctuation and create dialogue, however.
The next morning after expressing their love for one another in a night neither Christian or Judy would ever forget, they both took a long cold shower to help them cool down. After Judy got dressed in a blue sun dress, and Christian put on shorts and a tee shirt, they took their canes, linked arms and locked their hotel room door. With their keys put in their pockets of their rain jackets, since when they listened to the news on their radio in their room as they layed in bed talking listening to rain forecast, they thought it would better to be prepared. They aslso took their one umbrella, since they wanted to be romantic and share one umbrella. They walked into a small cafe in the hotel, and took their seats in a large booth. A waitress came to their table, and asked them for their orders. "Hello there what would you like to have today"? Christian and Judy put their braille menus to the side, and they turned when they heard the waitress ask them her question. "I would like a spanish omlette and a glass of orange juice." "I will have the same." Judy said, and the waitress wrote down their orders on her pad quickly. "Of course your food will be right out." "Thank you." Christian and Judy said in unison. "No problem." The waitress said cheerily, and she walked away to put in their breakfast orders. After they ate and talked about what they would do for the rest of the day, they payed the check and decided to take a walk in a park down the street from the hotel. They walked for a few hours, and then the sun started to beat down on them like it was trying to fry an egg. They decided to rest under a cherry tree for a while. They sat and talked for a while, just enjoying one another's company. Then the rain came down and they danced in the rain laughing happily. Then after the rain stopped, a beautiful rainbow appeared, and they kept walking back to the hotel. Since the sun was setting, they decided to have dinner in the park. Now that the day's humidity was gone, and a nice cool breeze blew through the trees softly, Judy thought to herself this day could not get any better. After they ate and drank a few glasses of wine, they decided to swing. "I feel like a little girl." Judy laughed, as they swang to and fro, letting the wind blow through the trees above them. "That is the point love." Christian quipped, laughing at her adorable inocence. After they finished swinging, they went back to the hotel. They took a shower and got into bed. They made love for a few hours, then they snuggled under the covers. Christian held Judy close his arms wrapped lovingly around her. She snuggled closer in his embrace, and drifted off to sleep. "Judy"? Christian asked her softly, his voice soft and serene in the darkness as the stars and moon glistened brightly outside their window in a cloudless night sky. "Hmm"? Judy mumbled, half asleep completely content in her husband's embrace. "I love you Mrs. Gray." He said, as he kissed her lips gently. "I love you too Mr. Gray." She kissed him back passionately, and then they feel asleep after their wonderful day they had spent together! :) I wonder where the story will go from here? :)
Awakening the next day, Christian, after showering and eating breakfast with his wife asked her something that had been on his mind.
"Once we go back to the u.s, where should we live at, your place or myne?"
Judy hadn't really pondered this very much, she was so wrapped up in the previous day's events she didn't really let her brain process anything else then the moment she was living in at that time.
"It doesn't really matter to me hun, as long as we have each other, and as long as we put God first we'll be alright."
"For he knows what's best for us, and humanity itself.
After getting on a plane and flying for about 12 hours the arrived back in the land of the free. At least they thought so.
They decided to move into Christian's since she felt her place was a bit large, she didn't feel as though she'd need all that extra room.
They figured they might have companny ocationally but it wouldn't be more then one or two people at most. Though things could change at any given moment.
3 months later...
Judy sat, or rather kneeled in front of the toilet one morning. She'd never been this sick before in her life.
Even when she'd gotten drunk once during her twenty first birthday, she'd thrown up a little, but that was nothing compared to the things that were coming out of her.
"Oh sweetie, do you think maybe its the flew or something?" Christian asked.
"I don't know, i should probably schedule a doctor's appointment.
She stood in the kitchen, arms folded across her chest, pacing back and forth, wondering how she was going to break the news.
She had to, there wasn't a way out of it.
If he truly did love her like he had professed, then this would only bring them closer together.
She knew that it'd be difficult, but knew that she had people she could ask for advice, help and dirrection if need be.
But above all, she knew that with God on there side nothing was impossible.
"Hey love, can you come in here?" she asked her husband.
Christian walked into the kitchen and sat next to his wife smiling brodly.
"So, how did the doctor's go?" he asked thinking nothing of it.
"That's just it, there's something i have to tell you." Judy said, an edge of worry creeping into her voice.
He'd never heard her sound worried before and it worried him, "It couldn't be...no...its impossible..." he thought to himself
But it wasn't, and Judy confirmed his suspicions by saying, "I'm pregnant."
He thought his brain stopped for a moment, it felt as though his heart had skipped several beats and it was on overdrive trying to catch up.
Time felt like a knife in his gut, twisting at his innards like a killer with his victim.
The next thing that went through him were the emotions, an there were many.
Confusion, nervousness, worry for his wife and unborn child, and most of all, not knowing what it would be like to be a blind parent.
He could almost hear the riddicule coming from passersby on the street, and it made him want to rip their throats out if they so laid a finger or insult on him or his wife and child.
"Honey, what's going through your mind, talk to me." Judy said, the silence was killing her.
The one emotion Christian felt envelope his mind heart body and soul was his love for his wife, and his love for his son or daughter Judy would bring into this world and he couldn't wait to show it to him orher. He wrapped his arms around Judy, and hugged her tightly. He held her for a long time, then he spoke. He had tears of joy running down his face. "Darling are you all right"? Judy asked her husband softly, and she caressed his cheek with her hand lovingly. "Yes my love I am fine." He said happily. "I was worried and I still am a bit nervous. I was just thinking about how hard it is going to be blind parents." "I know." Judy soothed, rubbing his back. "I am worried too but we can do anything together." She said brightly, and Christian laughed happily. "I am so lucky. Christian said, as they sat in the kitchen table together looking out the window. "I am going to be a father and I know I will love it. I have a beautiful home I love sharing with you each day. I have a wonderful wife. I am married to Judy Gray and I love her. God has blessed with such a beautiful miracle and I can't wait to raise our son and daughter with you." Judy beamed, and they hugged. They took hands, and went for a small stroll. Then they sat inside, so Judy could rest and they could spend more time together! :) What will happen next for Mr. and Mrs. Gray? I can't wait to see where the story will turn next! :)
As they sat in silence in their kitchen, Christian was lost in thought. He'd smelled that familiar amoniac smell that often came from the meth labs in suburbia: faint, disguised, but still present to a sensitive nose such as his. He didn't know what Judy knew of any of that stuff, but inwardly shuddered at the idea of their new child growing up in a neighborhood with a meth lab.
At the edge of his mind, he heard the revving and backing sound of a couple of midsized vehicles. What he didn't see were the blue lights outside the window.
Judy put a hand on his leg: she'd heard his foot tapping arhythmically as his thoughts had moved from baby to meth lab.
"What are you thinking about?" she asked tentatively.
Christian cleared his throat.
Sudddenly they were both disoriented by something like a military Flashbang going off: glass from the windows went everywhere, the door flew open and off its hinges, shoutts rang out, and
still disoriented, Christian grabbed Judy and hit the ground, dragging her down with her. She seemed to resist going down, so he pulled harder, protecting her from any incoming bullets or shrapnel.
"Police!"
"Drug enforcement!"
"We've got a warrant to search your place for meth!"
"Stay on the ground!"
Boots clomped around them and the heat from several large spotlights shone over them like the equatorial sun they had experienced in Cuba.
And then the shouts died down, there were murmurs among the officers, a radio confirming the address. That wasn't their address! Before Christian could speak, a pair of boots approached his head and a man's voice from above him:
"We're terribly sorry, this street is not well marked. We had the wrong address. Do you know about a meth lab in this area?"
"Meth lab!" interposed Judy, "There isn't any meth lab in THIS neighborhood!"
"I'm afraid there is, said the officer, helping them up. Judy was holding her stomach now.
"I need to sit down," she said weakly. As Christian seated her on the couch, he noticed she had curled into herself protecting her stomach, and then his foot found the coffee table.
"We're going to need an ambulance," he told the officer, "my wife is pregnant and it looks like she sustained an injury."
"We'll sort this out," said the officer, gesticulating at the debris on the floor,
"We'll sort this out with my lawyer!" interrupted Christian. "Now, for the ambulance.
Later at the hospital, after the operation where the baby miscarried, they sat in Judy's room while she recovered, and Cristian made phone calls to his lawyer to settle this.
Judy was at a loss for words, all she had for the time being were the thoughts whirling around her brain like silver bullets aimed at a monster.
"How the fuck can we be living in a world where people make drugs in broad daylight?"
"What was the gender of our child, how could this happen, why now?"
Her insides longed for comfort, it felt as though a piece of her soul had died along with that child, and the pain she felt wouldn't be going away for a while.
Never in her life had she hurt this much, she ached to hold her unborn child, to teach it the ways of the world.
The heart that was once whole was now in a million pieces at the bottom of her soul, and she wasn't sure when it would be fixed.
Even when her loving husband had held her and tried everything he could to comfort her, nothing worked.
At least for the time being.
She knew she would eventually heal, but right now wasn't the time.
One year later...
Her Parents, Karen and Ron sat across from the couple in their home on a windy day in September.
Lovely, writers, just lovely.
Only thing your promoter noticed is
"I am so lucky. Christian said, as they sat in the kitchen table together looking out the window. "I am going to be a father and I know I will love it. Maybe facing the window, not looking out of it?
Judy faced her parents, and squeezed Christian's hand in hers softly, to reassure him she was all right. "Mother, father, please don't worry about me. I will go out tommorrow and find a job as a waitress. And on the side I will send in my stories and poems and make a newspaper blog to keep my creative side flourishing and alive. I will also start an online advice column, so I can help people who have been through hard times like we have just been through, and help them see that all will be right in the end as long as they have family and faith when they feel lost, or the world seems dark." "Well." Her mother said, smiling kindly at her daughter. "Your father and I thought you would be depressed after you had your miscarriage, but I can tell we were wrong. We are very proud of you." "Yes we are you are a strong woman just like your mother." "Thank you father." Judy said laughing happily, and her laughter warmed Christian's heart like a warm fire just being lit on a cold winter's night. "Well to be honest I was sad for a while but between Christian's confidence in me and God's constant showing me of all my talents in dreams I realized I had to move on and live my life to the best of my abilities." Judy said confidently, and happily, her voice proud and eager to see what her future held now that her heart was open and full of joy once more. "I will support Judy in all she does because I know she can do anything she sets her mind to." Christian said, a smile covering his face like paint when a new painting now replaces a once blank canvis. "Thank you my love that means so much more coming from you. Thank you for believing in my dreams." She hugs Christian tightly, and they kiss gently. "I would do anything to make you happy I love you." "I love you too." Judy said, and they went inside to enjoy a nice meal, and to spend a few hours with her parents before they went to their new home. After they bought their new mansion since Christian had to only spend a few hours on his cell as they drove to their new home in his limo to his lawyer before he realized the two police officers were wrong, and promised that Christian and his wife would never be disturbed again. Christian was happy to know the two crooks Count Gustav Turnikov and his partner Slomo Becklestine were caught and were now in prison without no possibility of being bailed out, and were in prison for life, Christian could rest easy knowing him and his wife were now safe forever. He squeezed her hand, and faced her. As they snuggled comfortably in bed that night and they lay beside one another, Christian realized two things. I could not be happier, he thought. I have a beautiful wife who I know will make this world a beautiful and harmonious place with all she does to touch and make it a better place. And he knew in a few years they could always try again, and have children when they were ready for that new adventure. For now, they just enjoyed what life had in store for them, and Judy wondered as she slept, I know I will be a mother some day. God blessed me with a wonderful husband, I know when the time is right, he will bless us with as many children as we wish, and they will be able to experience our enormous love for them, and they will see through our love, protection, and guidance, just how amazing this world is! She sighed happily, as she faced the window. "I love you Christian." Judy said with passion laced in her voice, like a warm chocolate cake after it has just finished baking and is ready to be eaten. "I love you too my darling and I always will." "So will I." Judy said back, and she fell asleep content. As they slept, the stars shown the brightest ever in America, and there were no clouds in the sky. The moon was high in the sky, full of promise and great things that were to come for this wonderful couple, things they could not even begin to dream or even fathom. :) Here is my newest installment! Where will our story go from here? :) I can't wait to see where someone else takes it. I always like to read the new installments! :) They are always exciting and full of adventure! :)
Warning:the following entry is going to take a strange twist, if your easily offended do not read
Judy woke the next morning as happy as ever, having no idea what was instore for her.
She was unfortunately going to find out a secret that Christian had been keeping from her.
It would literally tear her apart limb from limb.
Christian was a shifter, a person who could change his appearance at will, and he could become anything he set his mind to.
While he appeared to be a handsom, loving blind man to his wife, he also was a cold bloodede killer who knew how to work the system.
He could almost taste her flesh and blood in his mouth, feel her bones shattering beneath his teeth as he got ready to go to work, but now would be foolish.
Judy had never given him a reason to hurt her, on the contrary she was the most amazing woman he'd ever met.
But he couldn't deny the thing that longed to burst from inside him and rip her to shredds.
That evening, judy came home after searching for jobs, she'd gotten a couple who said they'd consider her, and she was happy.
"Honey, I'm home!" Judy sang hapily as she walked in the door. There was no answer from Christian.
"Hmm, that's strange, normally he's home already." Judy thought to herself.
She decided that maybe he had to work late, after calling his name a few more times with no reply.
She walked into the bedroom and sat down on the edge of the bed, and that's when she felt teeth sink into her leg and rip it from her body.
Blood was everywhere, and she fell to the ground screaming in shock and agony, but the wolf that she couldn't see continued its rampage until there was nothing left.
Satisfied, Christian then changed himself into a bird, and flew out an open window, disapearing into the sky.
Yes so good and bad. Nice.
Come on writers!
Judy also had a dark secret as well that no one knew not her parents or Christian. She could transport her spirit into anyone or anything she wished. So as her spirit traveled across different countries, and flew across the sea, Judy was deciding where she wanted to transport her spirit next. I can't let this world be turned evil and dark by someone like Christian. As soon as her spirit stopped, Judy calmed herself. She realized she was in a large forest in India, where the trees were so many they covered the whole lush forest with shade so her spirit could relax. Ah India, it is the only place on earth that stirs the imagination. She saw a gazelle in the distence drinking from a watering hole not far from her in a distence, and she decided this would be her who she would become. She transfered her spirit into the gazelle, and the gazelle's eyes looked up, but then continued to drink since it was hot. Ikobako the gazelle didn't quite know what happened, but she thought nothing of it. After she finished drinking, she found a large tree close by the watering hole, and she layed down and slept. Judy reassembiled herself, and came to Ikobako in a dream. "Ikobakou, can you hear me"? Ikobakou looked around her, wondering where the voice came from. "Don't be frightened please." Judy's voice soothed the frightened animal, who was ready to run at a moment's notice her sleep being disturbed by this strange voice. Ikobakou listened intently to what Judy told her, and wondered why she was chosen. She knew the woman had a reason, so she felt proud she was chosen out of all the other animals out of the kingdom she could have had. She knew she had to find a way to seek revenge on Christian but how? "Don't worry Ikobakou together we will make a difference in this world while giving Christian a taste of his medicine at the same time." Intrigued, Ikobakou said she would help Judy out; completely unaware how cruel this sweet woman could be when her world was turned dark and cold by a man she thought was her soul mate's cruel and costly mistake to feed his sick ends and fuel his satisfaction. One thing was for sure, he would not get away with what he had done to her, Judy would make sure of that. Where will our story go from here? I will have to wait and see. Have fun! :)
As Christian circled overhead, feeling the thermal sensation of flight beneath his wings and breast, a pair of neighbor boys crouched behind some bushes. He noted the flash of a lighter as the boys took turns flicking the light. One spotted him circling overhead, dropped the lighter, and immediately grabbed a fist-sized rock.
"Hey birdie, think fast!" he crowed.
Christian felt the stone's impact on his keelbone, that breastbone ridge only birds possess. The pain and the loss of the rudder which the keel provides caused Christian to dip and swoop, sickeningly plummetting towards the hard sidewalk. A tilt, a flip of one wing, and he steered himself over the bark dust, an easier landing.
As soon as he flopped onto the surface, keelbone throbbing unbelievably, the second boy snatched him up and shoved him into his coat pocket.
"Hey, great shot!" he crowed. "Now let's see what Missie does with 'im!"
Missy, an elderly and embittered gray siamese mix growled as the boys approached. Quickly, Christian was yanked from the suffocating jacket pocket and thrust in front of the hissing cat.
"Don't let her get away, though! We want to watch!"
Seathing with rage Christian turned himself into a rock and waited.
Both the cat and the boys looked confused, for a second ago there was something for the cat to play with, and now it wasn't there.
"How the hell did that bird get away?" one of the boy's asked, "It was here! We saw it!"
"Beats me, how'd that rock get there?"
"You idiot, rocks are all over the place, its like it just disapeared or something." the first boy surmised.
"You don't think that that rock was the bird do you?" the first boy asked?
"Are you nuts, of course that's not possible, that's stuff that you hear about in fairytales." The second boy scoffed.
Playfully shuving the first boy, the were ingulfed in there wrestling match and forgot all about the rock that unbeknownced to them had turned into a bee and flew away.
Christian thought about stinging them both to death but thought better of it.
Meanwhile, the spirit of Judy was sleeping when she suddenly woke with a start.
A bee had landed on a tree nearby her and was drinking the nectar from a flower, she instantly knew that this was no ordinary bee.
For when she looked at it she could see into the very depths of its soul and knew it was Christian.
"Your time has come you wretched bastard!" She spoke to the bee.
Christian had no time to react because as juddy's spirit snapped the branch which the bee sat upon, she swallowed the bee after biting its head off and making sure his spirit was destroyed for good.
She thought about inhabiting her mortal body again and giving her parents closure, but she then realized she'd have a lot of explaining to do, so she gave it to them in another form.
She came to them both in a dream, separately of course so that they would both see for themselves.
Karen was sound assleep when she was suddenly thrust into a dream, at least she thought it was.
She heard Juddy's voice speaking to her, "Mother, fear not, for I'm ok, and Christian got what he deserves."
She woke with a start, not sure whether to believe her ears or not. Her family had no mental problems what so ever, and yet she couldn't deny what she heard.
After telling her husband about it, he looked at her with equal shock.
"Your not going to believe this, but i experienced the same thing." Her husband said.
"Maybe that's God's way of letting us know she's ok?" Karen pondered.
"God works in mysterious ways." Juddy's spirit replied to them both, making them both jump and smile at the same time.
The End.
Ah. I thank you all vary much for making this story come to life, love, pain, and happy endings. A true Romance. Smile.
Peace!